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Really wish I had some more time to work on this, but sadly the NGADM and other collaborations have kept me busy. Best of luck to everyone!
I like the groovy bass and bright piano. Tiny detail: when you cut off the piano after the shimmering effect at :05, it disrupts the flow a bit. Much better idea to let the reverb do the work there (which you actually did do at :10 and :16, just not :05 for some reason). This piece has a really smooth and laid-back mood that I like a lot. Unfortunately, it’s really repetitive and doesn’t have much structuring. I don’t really consider it a properly complete track, which is a shame considering the cool mood and admirable sound design. I’d like to see you flesh out the composition a lot more and add some dynamic contrast, phrasing, and variety to the main riffs. There’s a lot of potential here, though - I’d highly encourage you to keep working on this piece. Keep at it, TolanMusic! ;)
Glad you enjoy :)
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