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The rise of the machine

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Uploaded
Jul 9, 2017 | 11:56 PM EDT
File Info
Song
6.4 MB
2 min 56 sec
Score
4.04 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.04 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
240 Plays | 7 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
Tags:
unfinished
djent
round1
ngadm17

Author Comments

EDIT: thanks to the new deadline i got to work on this a bit more :D

I'll finish this later :( ... all done in one day cause of finals

Reviews


TaintedLogicTaintedLogic

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I like the tranquil mood at the beginning, as well as the ominous tint. The progression with the heavy guitars is enjoyable. I like how you contrasted the energy and passion throughout the piece, although the slower part at :58 lacks a strong sense of direction IMO, and also drags on a bit long. Much of the piece is pretty minimalistic, despite the appeal of the atmosphere and mood. The rhythmic elements of the piece are good, but I definitely think you needed another melodic section towards the end to hit the piece home. The repetition of the riff at the beginning wears on me after a while, and the piece doesn’t really feel climactic or conclusive by the end. Strong start, but this needed more effort put into the composition. Keep at it, InYourDreams! ;)

8/10



johnfnjohnfn

Rated 4 / 5 stars

ah im bummed this was rushed for you cuz you're one of my favorites (and this already is pretty awesome)! hope to hear more from you soon :>



DivoFSTDivoFST

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This is very impressive for something that was done in a day!
I love the more melodic part, it really has a soul and emotion!
However it sounds a bit repetitive, only has 2 parts that basically repeat (surely for the lack of time)
Good job!