Yeah.

Pretty good at the start, but the master volume is reaaally low, I had to near-max my speakers on my laptop to hear it decently. XP Otherwise its decent.

Good effort, but you need to improve...

Yeah, i think you got a good start, but you need to improve man. Like, why don't you check Sytrus? and see the different presets? They really help you in your tunes. Oh, i would recommend you to search for a FL tutorial. You need to learn how to use modulation, how to create a melody, how to use the mixer... well, ill give you some tips, to create a good melody, start with a 4 note bassline =) then, transform this f4 note bassline in a 8 note lead instrument then 16 vice versa. Don't give up!!