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Jun 3, 2017 | 5:33 PM EDT
File Info
Song
6.1 MB
2 min 42 sec
Score
4.00 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.00 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Other - Cinematic
Tags:
piano
sad
reflect
hopeful

Author Comments

I made this song for a scene of my cartoon. I was a bored college student waiting for finals week to be finished, so I made this song to get through the trenches.

I originally composed this song on a real piano, but I only have a piano keyboard, now. So, it's not as organic as I would like, but I hope you still enjoy it!

Tool:
FL Studio 12
Native FL Studio Piano plugin (modified my own piano settings)
Sonatina Symphonic Orchestra pack

Reviews


ADR3-NADR3-N

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Sounds quite empty before it gets going, but I think this may be what you're going for. However, it stops holding my interest somewhat due to lack of dynamic contrast and very slow, somewhat uninteresting progression. The chords ported around with doubled octaves are a little predictable, and it sounds very much like something we've all heard before. However, this doesn't necessarily make it bad.

Release on your piano notes needs to be a little longer, or perhaps there should be more reverb. Cutoffs are very short and abrupt in what feels should be a spacious piece.

Your mixing is extremely muddy! Percussion sounds like it's a mile away, hiding under the piano, and FX is drowning it. Too much reverb, too long of a release, not enough highs and mids. Perc should almost always cut through, even in quiet pieces such as this, to give a little drive. Remember not to do any sort of compression or FX on the master until you've got ALL of your volume leveling down pat. It can make it impossible to make good mixing decisions.

2:15 feels less like an ending and more where the track should have been at its height. I would have shortened your intro by about half and built to that a little more quickly, held it for most of the duration of the track, then fell off into a diminuendo and stinger on the end. If you don't know what I'm talking about, listen to some similar pieces in the genre. I'm getting sadness and determination from this piece, but it delivers none of the determination until the very end, when it's too late to enjoy!


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rsonbie456 responds:

Thanks for the awesome suggestions! I agree with what you noticed. I'll try to improve mixing a bit more.

Originally, this song was going to be for an animation, so I timed the ending scene with the ending melody. However, I realized that as a piece alone, it does move too slow as it does not have anything interesting in the beginning.

Yeah, I'm still trying to figure out mixing/EQ. I recently just got into the realm of actually messing with it. I'll take what you said for future stuff.


jessieyun0404jessieyun0404

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I love the melodic tunes of Piano... so emotional!


rsonbie456 responds:

Thank you :) !