ok-

well it was a lot of screaming in the main synth, but the elody it played did good though it was only a looped synth there with some crazy background acid bass. Great percussion work on this though-

The base is good though it isn't exactly any shizbizzle, and where did your mastering go?:

Hm

This was ok. It was boring, with no interesting synths or fx to grab your attention. The melody was uninteresting too. Just work on more interesting sounds and melodies to grab the listeners attention. Overall it wasnt bad though. You should add a bassline though.