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lance_album: preview _1
Ugh, I like it.
A lot of changes, cool bass part.
The chip tune is so... off, but in the best way. I can't tell if it's just randomly put together or precisely placed the way it is for the effect you're apparently achieving. but the amelodic nature and robotic, almost... mentally ill. It's really intoxicating.
You have a spark for happy accidents me thinks... could be wrong. which means you're not completely off the hook, but I quite enjoyed this.
I like what you are going for here, but I feel like there is lots of room for tightening up. The section around 1:20 the arpeggios just don't mesh too well altogether for me. The parts seem to clash.
I dig the funk at around 2:39, the piano chords are nice. My biggest piece of critique is to minimize dissonance. There are quite a few spots where I found chords, basslines, and melodies to disagree with each other notewise. If you can clean some of that up I think the track would for sure have a pretty cool and unusual vibe, it's just at the moment that vibe is getting a little lost. Hope that helps!
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