Score: 8
"Hmmm"
date: February 19, 2007
The background noises in my opinion need to be louder, so that you really feel like you're in a steam room. I just realized that when you bring in the loud lead, there's another melody going on in the background, but its too quiet. I think you need to quiet down that lead :P
Other than that, good. The melodies could actually be sped up a little bit here (there's just no pleasing me :P) A little short, but then again, its only a section of a longer song...
Author's Response:
The other melody in the background is really just meant to be background ^_^ They're not really meant to harmonize. I wanted the focus to be on the main lead. Also, this section is a little slower on purpose.
Thanks for the review :D