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Uploaded
Feb 15, 2007 | 6:56 PM EST
File Info
Song
2.4 MB
2 min 39 sec
Score
0.78 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 0.78 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
928 Plays | 194 Downloads
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Genres:
Southern Flavor - Country
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Author Comments

It's the first song i submit to newgrounds so please don't be kinda hard with me PLEASE!

Reviews


LJCoffeeLJCoffee

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I'm so disappointed...

OK - I'll break down the scores that I assigned:

Originality - 6
I've never heard this exact arrangement of 16th notes before so I decided to at least give you something.

Diversity - 3
As far as I could tell, we're looking at a single instrument and a relentless mashing of pseudo random keys all quantized to 16th notes. No variation other than the actual notes = very little diversity = very low score. :(

Clarity - 6
Yes, for what it was it was clear enough - not great - but not crap quality either.

Effort - 2
OK - I'm thinking that you just really wanted submit something, anything, to the AP and rushed this one out the door without giving it much, if any, thought. I'm sorry to have to say this but if you worked really hard on this piece and are very proud of it then you might want to reconsider your passion for music. The most effort that I could perceive was you asking for conversion utilities in the forums.

Overall - 3
Again, not trying to be mean - I'm just being honest. This track barely qualifies as an experiment used to learn your software export settings. This is a terrible track no matter how you slice it. I'm not going to spare your feelings and tell you it has potential or anything like that because frankly, I don't think that it does. I've heard much better compositions that were randomly generated by software with no human intervention at all.

Sorry pal but I tried and tried and I just can't give this a higher score. I have to vote 1 on this. I absolutely cannot comfortably vote any higher than that on this track. Put some effort into your next tracks, learn a little, try a few new things like structure, melody and accompaniment, etc. and you might deserve higher scores in the future but this just isn't worth it in it's current state.


DP00 responds:

Omfg! it's the first time i see someone that does like a track that does say '' WHAT THE FUCK DUDE IT'S PIECE OF CRAP!!!'' or something like this! your review is constructive and i gotta tell you 2 things!

1. My program really sucks there is only one instrument... guess whom it is ... Ya! Piano XD!

2. Your'e right, i really wanted to submit to audio portal, i was like, i'll send this one and i'll won't have to wait forever until it gets on AP after! And i agree this track isn't really good... but i wrote it was my first, as mean, that i REALLY wanted to submit!

Well to conclude, no more submissions from me until i got a REALLY BETTER program!

I like your review it's constructive!


ChrisOroscoChrisOrosco

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Um....okay

Im not sure what in the hell this is even suppost to be....

All of your notes seem to go everywhere...no organization at all......

And country?

Im sorry...but you can do better.


DP00 responds:

well this is only a random song and country well i know XD error of mine but notes don't go everywhere =0
and i know i can do better and of course I WILL =) lol well my first review =D thankx! lol