it's hot but one thing.........

I'm giving this a 4/5 and a 9/10. The trake is hot I mean HOT but that heart is SO DAMN OUT OF PLACE it's killing me that's the only thing that's hurtting the beat.

man

i wish i would hav a big fat joint to lolz, just jokin dawg i see u got a rel good track here dawg, takin it easy huh? wheres the boom u supposed to come wit :D
ok this is cool, a DL and a 5 fo sho
im makin a new project man, so ill holla at u when done, it goin to be rel cool.
aight peace dawg.

ahhh

It waz cool bro but a bit too repeatitive.
But here's what I think more of it and what I think could help it incase you have a remix in mind. Don't do any build-ups ...like have it sound like a little somethin at the start and then have it tight at the end lol dont do that cuz I know some people that actually wont listen to the whole thing.

-DiCeTrAiN8o8™ .aKa. NeX-P™