Umm, Okay

Here is some constructive critisim. And because of this, you can come to my music and trash the crap out of me and my music, but what ev. I dobn't know how you were micing it all, but you could here the strings buzzing and snapping over the distortion. That doesn't sound to great. second of all, I don't mean to be rude, but dude, your not a singer. All in all, it seems like you tried, and you've got potential, but you need a band backing you up and maybe some better recording equipment.

Sorry for the mean-ness
Tapioca S.G.

need better recording equipment!

this could be fantastic if your recording equipment. you have a good voice but the quality is very poor.
rerecord and this will be a hell of a lot better