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Uploaded
Apr 21, 2017 | 12:17 PM EDT
File Info
Song
7.2 MB
3 min 8 sec
Score
1.00 / 5.00

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You may only use this piece for commercial purposes if your work is a web-based game or animation, otherwise you must make specific arrangements with the artist.

Score:
Rated 1.00 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
183 Plays | 5 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Dance
Tags:
house
techno
terrible
chiptune

Author Comments

many things feel really wrong about this one but can't quiet get what it is.
would reeeeeealy appreciate some harsh criticism!

...
well if you want something done - do it yourself.

#criticizeyourself
melody makes me bored because it's the same all the time.
transitions are boring, this noise thing gets old really fast
kinda like how the last section is fuller and louder.
bass before the break gets louder which is kinda cool but melody stays the same... it could work but kinda doesn't.
no drum variety too, but i guess it's the genre.
break is too sudden as well as the ending, could use some silence before the piano jumps in.
uffffff.
but again these are the things that i can see. i probably miss a ton of important stuff.

ooooooh i want to improve so much so much so much.

So don't mind tearing anything i post to bloody pieces, i not only don't mind, in fact - i really want that!

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