well then... the drums arent too bad they seem a bit flat. it could have a nice groove but the sounds just are kind of cheap. especially the string sound. One thing i like to do if i have a melody thats just too simple is i record myself playing and then sample myself and chop up what i played. its a good way to get kind of a vibe going and build from there. Youuuuuuuuu should keep trying :)