Quite good

i wuite liked your idea butr it did sound a little bit like you were playing two travks at once and it got a bit muddled.

not bad at all

this is pretty good!
the only thing i would suggest is WAY MORE variation on the percussion. It really did start to get repetitive. Maybe break the song up into sections a bit more, and you can use other drum kits in different parts. Also would be good with:
-More modulation and FX
-More panning
-A really fast Closed Hat pattern in the background which comes in near the middle.
-MORE BASS! HELL YEAH! maybe a long deep kick/sub bass which plays regularly
-Ive got more, just not right off the top of my head.

This song has so much potential! I love it.
What software did you use?

creative

extra glitchy, mang
and you pulled it off.
only thing ive been able to pull off
is my pecker.
anyways, i know it's DnB,
but the best songs have a higher pitched "hook" sound
and this could use one.
but it's great as is as a vg song.

How do you do it?

Jeez man, you just keep churning out tracks like nobody's business... and they all kick ass! How the hell do you do it? Is this all you do all day, every day? I mean, c'mon; it takes me a week or so to finish a decent song, and you've got two a day!? Get outta here... 5's & dl's all around. Good grief...

O_O

Wow... definately incredibly glitchy. Incredibly.

I can't even hope to make stuff like this XD. I wouldn't know where to start. The mix is incredible, the equalizing and mastering immaculate.

I'm sorry padman1 I don't have anything to criticize I have no idea how to, but I wanted to drop my support regardless, so here it is. Keep up the good fight and keep them coming!