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My 2nd entry for AIM2017
Inspirational art by @Artbycaiti
This somehow manages to creep me out and soothe me at the same time. I'm not sure if this is the intent. The instrumentation could use a bit more attention, especially to velocity. Filter effects are nice though. I'm just not quite able to get into it as I feel I should. Writing makes for a very busy piece where not all quite goes together. The 808 in particular clashes very badly with the chords you're trying to represent.
"I'm not sure if this is the intent." Pretty much my intent, glad that part worked out lol. Yeah had messed with the pitch of the previous 808 while tuning it, then swapped it out for the current... and well.. fudged it up. Thanks again for the feedback, yall really helping me narrow down faults!
Very strange, yet interesting. I like the vibe it gives off. At first I wasn't sure what to think of the melody, but it somehow works. I like the use of effects and it's soothing, and sounds right. I feel the notes of the bass that comes in later on clashes with the melody and is off key, and the bass could come in earlier, would carry the song nicely if it was more on key with the rest, I love the use of sounds here. Other than that, great job.
Do you mean the 808s in the 2nd half of the song or the first verse with the reversed 808? Either way, definitely coulda done more with both. Thanks for the feedback, theyre greatly appreciated!
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