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4.68 / 5.00

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Rated 4.68 / 5 stars
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Easy Listening - Solo Instrument
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I love the look on this guys' face. Looks like the kinda guy who ain't gunna stop for NUTHIN'! And so...I composed this instrumental piece using nothing but a single guitar and a mic and my DAW. All sounds are me playing guitar, no samples.

And here's the link to the artwork:

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/artdeepmind/olstead-rothgar

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FinnMKFinnMK

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

* This is an official 2017 NGUAC review *

Oh man, this one. Really great talent, really not-so-great production. Into the details...

Mixing, mastering and production: This was the real weak point. Now, it wasn't THAT weak - I could hear all the parts clearly and I was able to get into the emotional space of the piece. But at the end of the day it's just a bedroom recording, and you're competing with people who have studio-level production quality.
For acoustic guitar, getting a great recording setup is a bit of of an investment, but certainly it's the next production step I hear for you. I would get (if you don't already have) a decent condenser mic (and a little interface to give it phantom power) as well as a Shure SM57. Point the condenser where the neck meets the body of the guitar, and have the SM57 a bit away from the body of the guitar, pointing at the soundbox hole. Once there you can play with levels and distances - putting your condenser closer to the strings will pick up great plucking, while having it away will pick up chords and louder guitar much better.
I would also recommend recording to a click track if you're not already. There were a couple slight timing problems.

From a post-recording standpoint, definitely play around with reverb and panning; try to add to the character of the guitar without stripping the real, raw, live sound you have.

Mastering shouldn't be too difficult from there if you're sticking with just acoustic guitar, but it's still a crucial step. Simply having a multiband compressor, an EQ, and a maximizer + limiter on the premaster will do a world of good.

Composition: Beautiful, atmospheric. I really, truly enjoyed it. Now, to nitpick!
Your main melody is great, and is a beautiful moment when you play that EM and F#M chord in the A section. Solid solo in the middle of the piece. I definitely liked the idea of the harmonics, but they weren't quite executed perfectly - a couple minor performance errors took me out of the moment. After the solo is finished and you go back to the A section, the melody gets a bit drowned out a bit by your background layer - I think were it blended well, it would work fairly well however.

My only other note is in regards to the rest of the elements of the composition as a whole - structure, texture, atmosphere, etc. The reason you didn't get perfect scores in these other sections is not for any deficiency, but that I wasn't wowed by the other elements too much. There are some great moments, but to get that perfect 10 I need to be enthralled and wowed the whole time. Rest easy though! I didn't give anyone super close to a perfect composition score. But I just thought I'd clarify.

I'm certainly looking forward to what you come up with. If you can improve your recording, mixing, and mastering then you'll certainly be a top contender. That's a lot to say for just one guy with an acoustic guitar. It's a testament to your talent!


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Ceevro responds:

Thank you for that. I think that the mic I have is decent (certainly better than what I started with...which was the built-in mic in my laptop), and where my recordings are really lacking is actually in the acoustic space itself. There's a moment which you probably caught where my chair squeaked loudly. There's a high hiss from my computer fan. There's the gaddamn neighbor with the stupid-ass Harley he simply MUST rev for an hour every day. I can mitigate a lot of that on the cheap by setting up a recording wall before I record, but I simply don't have the space to leave it up, and so it adds an hour on to every recording session.

On the mixing/mastering side: I've been taking some online courses in mixing/mastering. I'll have to be careful in the future with what I've learned, because most of what I've learned is that I tend to overdo FX that I find really cool. ESPECIALLY reverb. I just love the sound of loud reverb, and it seems like most people...don't. Most of what I could do to make things better would be to get a cleaner recording in the first place.

And performance: This was really, really hard to play. Yes, there were some errors in timing, and I deliberately let them be. I recorded for several hours, discarding every single part of the song at one point or another and eventually settled on the version you see here. I could have time-stretched or quantized a point or two, but it just sounded too mechanical to me. Better, I felt anyways, that you hate me for what I am, than love me for what I am not.

Thank you so much for the review! I will continue to improve!


MithyxSoundsMithyxSounds

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Why did I beat you? This is so much better than my entry!

Dude, this is awesome! Good job! I love the melodies. The percussive hits really contribute nicely to the atmosphere. 5/5


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Ceevro responds:

It would appear that the judges thought (quite rightly) that my mixing/mastering weren't up to par. I need to get cleaner recordings with less background noise to score better in the future! No substitute for good room acoustics!

...and I record in my bedroom.

But thanks so much for the review!


trunotfalstrunotfals

Rated 4 / 5 stars

***This is a NGUAC first round review. Forgive me if it is short, there are a hundred songs to get through!! Further rounds will be MUCH more in detail on your review!!***

Man.

Ceevro.

This is good., ugh so much soul. If I at all was able to compose for guitar (which hopefully will change in the future) This is like, exactly the style I Imagine. I even have this thing I jam out to that is very similar.

I LOVE the main "hook" or whatever you want to call it. The rhythm, everything about it.

I really wanted to hear a bit of variation. But it was still so good.

You need some better recording equipment. That room noise and high end recording hiss is holding you back man. this . is. greaet.

Well done.

Good luck in the Nguac


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Ceevro responds:

Sadly, my equipment is good. My space, however, is not. I need a way to separate my computer from my mic while still being able to use both...it's hard, being both the recording engineer AND the musician at the same time!

I have a few idea, but they cost more money than I can spend at the moment. I think I should try to limit myself to electric guitar in future rounds...though I'd lose ALL the acoustic percussion that I love doing so much.

Dang....never an easy way. 'Tis the lot of the musician!


A4753A4753

Rated 5 / 5 stars

0_0 man you're my god
are you an octopus? :0
anyways, very good song!
keep it up!!! :D


Ceevro responds:

I recently attended a Tommy Emmanuel concert. I can assure that there's a level much, much higher than the one I play on!


EDM364EDM364

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Highly impressed with your arrangement. Some places where intonation could be a bit better, but guitar by nature is not a perfect instrument, so a bit of flat and sharp here is expected. Extra points for using a single instrument. Mixing could use a bit of fine tuning on percussive bits, but again, arrangement makes up for it. Subtracting half a star for some small mistakes like near-missing harmonics, etc., which could have been cleaned up. A lot of people won't notice that.

I would say instrumentation doesn't really reflect the wintry vibe of the piece, but the arrangement reflects a rough and tumble, hard life. That very much fits the artwork. Fantastic piece, Ceevro!


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Ceevro responds:

Thank you!