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Mar 27, 2017 | 9:43 PM EDT
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Song
3 MB
1 min 20 sec
Score
0 / 5.00

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Rated 0 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Electronic - Drum N Bass
Tags:
shit
waffles
clusterfuck
delerium

Author Comments

Dont take this seriously, i plan to make better music in the future.

Reviews


RexoneRexone

Rated 1 / 5 stars

This is a nice start. But there are some very glaring issues about it.

The redundancy is the main problem. Each small jingle is repeated three times in a row, which is not very pleasing to listen to. The drums also never seem to change their pattern throughout the song.

The structure needs a ton of work. The song just jumps right in and repeats the same pattern until the end. Try to determine a set of bars for an intro, build, drop, etc. (using "Add marker" in the arrangement window).

Try to add more ambiance, effects, and more tracks in general.

I will give you one star rather than none because I can understand your attempt. Keep trying! I know you can improve. :)


DeleriumGD responds:

i cry nonetheless