there was something lacking

the sounds were kind of bland and the different pieces of the song didn't go together quite well.

Cool.

I liked this one a lot. It sounded very raw to me. Something refreshing after all these very fine tuned drum and base tracks.

It was way too short though, just as I started enjoying it ended.

Keep up with the street sounding tones though, if you add more then this you're going to make something amazing.

Keep it up man.