Score: 8
"Good - and a few suggestions, if you don't mind."
date: January 31, 2007
It sounds pretty good... and when you introduce your first melody, it sounds pretty good.
Reverse cymbal... and you bring the melody in again.
You just introduced a hat... this song is beginning to sound better.
Ooh, I'm beginning to notice high energy levels in this, which is good. You build things up quite nicely.
You know, this song is great, but it all sounds like one big buildup to something even bigger and better. I'm thinking you could somehow condense the essence of this song into a buildup (you could just build things up a lot faster) for a powerful, crazy, freeform, high energy song. Try it sometime. (I'm actually about to submit something - a few days away, actually =P - that's the perfect example of what I'm talking about... should I PM you so you can see what I'm talking about?)
My only other advice is to work on that hat of yours which you introduce towards the beginning of the song. (It sounds a bit overused.) Other than that, great job on this song. Keep going. =)
Lastly: why don't you stop by my audio page sometime? Review a song or two, maybe. =P I'd like it.
