Score: 9
"Good, good. Don't stop now. =)"
date: January 28, 2007
It's well done, and definitely has the potential to be a professional song if you had the time and experience. Your melody is good, as are your harmonies, and your percussion. =)
One suggestion I have is that it seems a bit too simple and repetitive. My idea is that, good as it sounds, you should make the song longer - add more harmonies, drum patterns, and maybe another melody. Mix and change things up a bit, you'll never know what you'll get. ;)
What do you mean, by torture? This is actually pretty good, for some of your first things in FL. Keep making music, I can see you getting really professional in a year or two. =D You've got my 5.
So I hope I helped and you enjoyed this review - why don't you review a song of mine if you have the time? Phantom Zero, maybe, or the latest version of Dark Storms at Sea. I would definitely appreciate it. =)
Author's Response:
Yea this is just one of those old things when I was like 13 or so, so most of the stuff is repetitive and tends to get annoying. I made it in Sony ACID alone, no FL :p
Thanks for the encouragement though man, that definitely is one of the things that helps the most...dang I need to start actually making some new things in FL, those 2 loops are the only things I've made so far.
I'll make sure to check out your stuff, thanks again.