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Jan 26, 2007 | 3:04 AM EST
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3.2 MB
3 min 32 sec
3.23 / 5.00

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Rated 3.23 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Industrial

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Ok, so newgrounds has labeled me as a vagrant.... whatever, just listen. it's good. really



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


you sound kind of like David Bowie


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


I actually liked your voice, I felt it gave a strange feel to the piece. True there were some moments it didn't work with the song's melody, but overall it was a rather neat feeling.

The song's beginning was very powerful, I really liked it. gr4ve knows more about electronic arts then me so take his advice more seriously, I can only tell you what I liked and didn't ;).

The fast arpeggiated notes gave it a powerful push. The robotic vox wasn't that annoying, but the transition to your voice again was far too quick, with no break down, or crash or nothing, I felt it could have been handled better.

The ending, where your voice trailed off saying "free", I thought that part was handled down perfect.

All in all a good piece, well done! Keep up the good fight. I'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime. Keep them coming Dj-PinkWalrus

Dj-PinkWalrus responds:

you know, listening back on this, I would have to say that the transition to my voice, specifically in the middle of the song, was a little to abrupt. Thank you very much for the advice! I will for sure look at your work!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


in the intro there was a melody that didnt fit. Also your singing was a bit offkey =P was good tho. Nice filtered breakbeat, those robotic vox got a bit annoying tho. The bass sounded good, and so did all the supporting synths. Later on in the song it sounded like u had too much going on at once, but that went away once your voice kicked in. So all in all, I just suggest work on the singing lol, and not cramming too much in there at once, then you'll be doin good. Good work, ill five it.


Dj-PinkWalrus responds:

yeah, my singing definitely was off key, i will see if i can't get through this shit on key. But hey, thank you very much for the favorable review!