Well.

Comments? Really boring, actually. That's because you "cooked it up in a little bit". Syntrus be damned, I fully agree with Solus.

Instead of thinking "I may finish this", try "I may actually start this". So far you have 2 slightly different measures, with absolutely no thought put into bass and drums, and a wee bit into synthwork.

If you have something that you actually worked on and given detailed attention to, point me there please.

lollers

hen ben ren means "very stupid person."

solus prolly sez that cuz, as far as i know, Jiao Zhang doesnt actually mean "dragon battle."
yes, i am chinese.

pretty spacy song.
kinda basic tho, i mean, its pretty standard as far as trance goes.
like the lead synth tho.

a five for you.

Death to Solus

Solus Fucking Sux ass hole i think thats somthing we can all agree on. 5/5 !0/10 keep up the good work Peace Syntrus out (0_0)

You really should finish it. =D

I can see you coming in with a quiet introduction and eventually building up to this. It has a really nice sci-fi feel to it, too. =D Please PM me if you submit a finished version - I'll review it ASAP. =)

Ah, why don't you go check out my songs as well? Try my latest two or three, I'd appreciate it if you reviewed one. =D

GRAAAAAAAAGH.

The combination of "buzz bass, kick, snare" NEEDS TO STOP.

MAKE. NEW. BASS.

STOP. MAKING. BASS. SECONDARY.

BASS. SHOULD. BE. A. PRIMARY. CONCERN.

DON'T. DO. WHAT. EVERY. ONE. ELSE. IS. DOING.

Okay. That's out.

Arps, nice. Good sound that you've got going with them, how did you manage that. I also like the stabs you've got going on in the background. Nice touch. And yes, mastering is your friend, but since this is a demo loop, I'm not gonna be too hard on that.

Anyways... "Jiao-Zhang"? >:(

How about "Hen Ben Ren"?