Nice! I like how you entirely changed the mood of the piece from a fast and lively one to a slower and heavier one. I like the new melodies and the synths. But I feel some parts are a little messy, especially because the piano and its reverb are too loud.
Author Comments
So, I had little pronlems making music 'cause a few days ago I just came back to Italy (I used to live in Romania for almost 3 years) and now I'm back! I decided to make a remake of my first song, I changed a bit the melodies, I made a better build-up and added more basses! I hope you will like what came out :)
Oh, me and my mate Nameless just made a SoundCloud account, be sure to check this song out on there!
>https://soundcloud.com/user-770392793/corkscrew-endless-dream-v2
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>https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCdAxoIY5xDayaWlbxJzyzHQ/videos?view_as=public
I hope you will enjoy this song, see you in the next!
-Corkscrew
ItzCorkscrew responds:
I agree with the "messy", expecially that to be honest. I'm not really orderly still, I still can't organise well the patterns I use. I hope I'll do better with the next, and If you want we can collaborate sometimes! =)
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- Dec 23, 2016
- 6:47 PM EST
- Genre
- Trance
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- Song
- 8.6 MB
- 4 min 43 sec
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