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Uploaded
Dec 20, 2016 | 4:22 PM EST
File Info
Song
3.9 MB
3 min 23 sec
Score
3.07 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.07 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
309 Plays | 6 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - House
Tags:
dance
house
mix
aria

Author Comments

New song!

I don't know how to classify this; I don't even know what the genres stand for anymore. Point is, I made a strange song, I like it, got some dance vibes, still putting it in House.

The "I'm gay" sample is from
maxmoefoetwo's Edward Watermelon hands bts part 1/3
at 9:36
/ watch?v=1Zgxrx89yHA

Cheers ^-^

Reviews


5TanLey5TanLey

Rated 3 / 5 stars

so it's me again, R4R is dead

I would put some filter (e.g. lowpass/highpass and automate its cutoff) on the arp during intro, it sounds super cheap when you just slap it there already in full power with sub bass and everything

the first drop at 0:40 sound quite slapdash, melody together with the beat sound really monotone, changing the length of some notes and rhythm of the beat now and then would do the trick

speaking of beat, drums should have variations every few bars, at least adding open hihats at some sections would help in a great way

the second drop at 1:30 is better, more house-ish though there are some false notes or weird intervals in the melody, which make it sound bad in certain places

ending also feels kinda cut, no filter, no fx, nothing.. maybe making that reverb tail longer and louder
would help

also more fx.. at least some tiny whooosh/sweeep/impact from time to time

good luck


DelitescentAria responds:

Thanks for the hindsight.

I am saddened by R4R's death, now not knowing how to get reviewed anymore.

I get where you're coming from with the filter, it definitely is cheap to just slap the arp on, I'll see to mess with Effector or look for other plugins to add effects (if you have any recommendations for a PC user, I'm all ears).

I definitely liked the second drop better too, sounded cleaner. I can't even touch sound design without messing up entirely, so if you have some pointers, again, all ears, maybe why my sounds are always a bit cheap. I'll look into false notes better next time, give it more of a listen. I'm still struggling with music, as it is very audible, good reviews help a lot.

Thanks for sticking through R4R, even though it's dead. I'll follow you and review your new stuff, if that means anything to you.

Thanks for the insight again and good luck right back at you.


iElectroniciElectronic

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice beat, but could use a little variety. The kicks would sound really well with triplets. Nice song though, looking forward for more.