Score: 9
"Very touching and soothing"
date: July 18, 2008
You got your thoughts across very well with this piece. The only thing I thought was missing was maybe some xylo, or glock, or marimba, whatever floats your boat, as a starry-type sound. Very descriptive of me, I know. I just figured you could start off with one of those instruments with the melody of the piano after the first break, then maybe bring the piano slowly back in.
Anyways, was Children of the Sky a script you have finished, or have you made it into something yet? Can you see it in live-action form, or did you picture it purely in animation form? I'm a budding cinematographer, and I was inspired by A Love Unending.
July 19, 2008
Author's Response:
I never got anywhere with writing it, let alone doing something with it, which is sad, too, because I love the story. If I could ever make one film of my own, I'd do this one. If you'd like, I'll send you the story in a nutshell.