its alright

very repedative and has an overexadurated kick, in the sense taht you turned up the volume on it way too much. the choice of synths and bass isnt too good either. lower the volume on your kick and maybe tone it up a bit by adding a snare on it or find a totaly new kick sample to use. can picture this being transformed into a good song but it would be better if i could hear id :D. keep working hard and try to study other peoples music and see what you like about it and incorperate their ideas in your songs.

p.s. check out my new songs (pwnology & The Epiphany) maybe it'll give u some ideas.

-DarkEpiphone