well...

I'm by no means that great at "creating" music myself but I seem to be good at helping others so I think I can give ya some slight advice here.

First off those claps/hats have go to go or be edited better with less of them, it cheapens up the sound and throws off the feel.

Theres no melody/synth to flow the song. Melodys and Synths are vital to creating great trance and techno beats.

The bass beats are fairly simplistic too... It seems like you just imported sounds from the Fruity loops files and just chose where to have them play, with very little or no editing to the presets of the song.

You have thise kool sound thats... I dunno how to describe it... it plays at relatively the same pace thru the whole loop constantly... I suggest giving this a FX number, then "F9" and add a flanger to it at least. Fiddle with those F9 sound Fx's and such to really make a decent change and effect.

The whole order seems kinda un-ordered and sloppy... but maybe with some fine tuning it might be alright. I know I didn't give a lot of help but its some.

Oh wait... intro's... Slow buildups are a great way to go ;)