Score: 9

"chilled!!"

by: venom2034

date: October 13, 2009

nice man its great to actully hear someone play there instrument and not use auto tune your voice is good i think your holding back a bit but good none the less come up with another verse and your sold
keep it comin

Score: 9

"A good review."

by: QuickFinder

date: July 24, 2007

This song is amazing. Your voice is superb. And what gets me about it is this intense note of pain and desperation I can just hear as you describe the monster's eyes...it's like listening to Dr. Jekyll himself.

Yours is easily one of the best songs I've come across, and yours is the sort of music that keeps me coming back to this site. Keep up the good work.

Score: 9

"hey man..."

by: pitbulljones

date: May 13, 2007

how you doing, just thought i'd bob by your page just checked this tune out. it's a really chilled out tune. The vocal tho in tune and musically clear seems a little bit held back, missing some energy, try a bit of compression, the double track is too perfect, have you took another take for the double or just copied the part? try using a detune on a monitor speak but not in the mix, or a small delay of 50ms then record your take, it'll just make it sound a bit more natural.

The guitar is sweet, nice picking and rhytmn support, is there a bass in there or is it the E string playing bass? anyways it's very clear the bass section, again the overall sound is a little muffled, lacking some energy, i think a little bit of overall compression on the track and an aurual enhancer would do wonders for the musical energy of this track.

overall tho the composition is really good, a chilling song, a little on the short side, maybe benifit from some string arrangments and some mellow percussion. but i really enjoyed listening to this song. been looping now for about 10 mins.

4.5/5 so you get a 5

pitters

(Couple of tracks up, less, 3 months down the line, Scarred, spiritual loop. scarred is the latest one)

Score: 10

"awesome make more!!"

by: irony-victim

date: May 6, 2007

Man all i gotta say is awesome.....and the fact its sounds like Death Cab for Cutie I'll Follow you into the dark.

Score: 10

"newbcawk"

by: SBB

date: April 16, 2007

now post the lyrics as I seem to be much better reading lyrics than following them though the lyrics really were clear in this piece. Your voice is good.

Seems to be you with your guitar and a bit of organ. Some slow, low mixed drums would fit good in this

What did you use to create this? Is everything a live recording or what

Great song, great for a first try at lyrics also here's my huge dick