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Oct 19, 2016 | 10:40 PM EDT
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Song
8.7 MB
3 min 47 sec
Score
3.91 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.91 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
375 Plays | 10 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - House
Tags:
cacola
nekrosis
electrobase

Author Comments

At first I was messing around with sounds because I had a bit of a writers block, but then this whole idea came to mind and I put it together. I didn't expect to use Sytrus in this, but @Acid-Notation uses Sytrus for many of his synths, so I gave it a go, and it came out nicely! This is dedicated to Cacola because he is really one of my favorite artists and is a true inspiration (whether you think so or not, you are! >:) ) so thank you!
Wow I said a lot.... anyways... Enjoy! :3

Reviews


MysteriousPresenceMysteriousPresence

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Sorry for the harsh review ! ='3

Melodies :
Here is, I think, the main problem of the track. There's a melody, but it's four notes. It's not enough to be a true melody. You need to build a melody which is memorable. You ought to use more notes and modulate that new melody in order it to catch the listener. For example : make an awesome melody in one part of the song, then, in the next part, use the same melody but change it a bit (more or less notes, change the tone...). Finally, hit the listener with a memorable return of the first version of your melody ! =3

Instruments :
To be honest, your instrumentalisation is my guilty pleasure ! Your mixing is great at some parts (that moment at 0:59, and I like how you rendered your work from 1:00 to 1:45). But your instruments need some work. First of all, I really like your drums and the 8-Bit synthesizer from 0:45 to 0:58. On the negative points, there's that reversed cymbals that is way too high-pitched at 1:45. You used a really weird bass from 2:17 to 2:31 which honestly hurts a bit. Plus, from this part, I don't know what you've done, but it's like the track is accelerating at 2:21. If that's what you wanted, well I can't say it's well done... Finally, that hat at the end of the track has nothing to do here.

Personality :
Your track has not an amazing personality I'm afraid. You need parts that suit together, there must be a logical progression line. The melody needs to be more memorable. I'm still giving you a half-star because of that unusual mixing from 1:00 to 1:45 ! ^^

Melodies : 0,5/2
Instruments : 1/2
Personality : 0,5/1

I'm sure you have potential ! You have great ideas, but you need to work on the melodies, and try to use instruments that don't hurt. Looking forward to hearing your next work ! ;)


NekrosisGD responds:

Oh it's no problem, I love honest reviews :3
The melody yes, is four notes, very simple and forgettable, something I caught onto after a bit.
I wanted to do more with my instrumentation, but before I knew how to use more in-vst settings I had mostly used mixer effects, but I'm glad you liked them a bit :p
Overall your review is very honest and spot on, and lucky for you, I am making a new song right now! The melody is a set of chords and I did some better instrumentation and mixing, hope you check it out when it's done! :p


CacolaCacola

Rated 5 / 5 stars

OOOH, AWW DUDE, FUCK, THIS MADE ME HAPPY
KEEP MAKING MUSIC, FOCUS ON IMPROVING, YOU HAVE POTENTIAL. YOU'RE COOL
I LOVE YOU
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥


People find this review helpful!
NekrosisGD responds:

OH MY GOD YOU LISTENED!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH! IT MEANS A LOT!
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