liking the synth lines

Hey DSMagnum,
I thought the melody in this was solid, Love synth chords played like that. It would be cool if there were some fx, either in the background or on some oof the instruments, just to add some extra atmosphere.
Nice song.

Sounds great!

I love this! Great job! ^_^

Hallelujah!

I love that beginning man, it raises your spirits! It should be played in churches everywhere! This really doesn't sound like a mourning song to me, but you did get the tempo right. The bass is alright, it just fills it in, and the drums are ok. Pretty good, although I can't imagine this being played at a funeral.

4/5

nice, good reason u made i too.

It works great as a mourning. the last reviewer said, the lead synth is too lound. im gona hav to say, its only a tad loud. but the type of synth is not so right. I would of done 1 simular, but more soft and string like with a reverb. and the piano shouldnt of been equalized. but still, its a good song. 5/5 from me to you.

on the right track

Dude, the chord progression you've got and the melodic ideas are all very good. But the lead sound, like in some of your others, is just way too, well, obnoxious and loud! Especially for a slower song, I think something a bit more mellow and sweet would suit.
Just fix that up, and this would be an enjoyable chilled track. Maybe spice up the bassline a little while you're at it. :)
Unleash the power man!