omg

thats crap
-_-

I like this song.

It sounds pretty good. The kick that you fade in in the beginning starts by sounding off-beat, but now it has a really bouncy quality to it. I'm really liking this song. =D How do you do that trick with the bass - how do you take it from where you introduce the kick in the beginning to when you introduce the hat? You know, with the pitch? XD

Other than that, it's a pretty good song. I like it a lot. =D You've got my 5's.

No full score, but...

... i liked it. =) Sound a bit different than your others. Make more. =)

well.

iono.
compared to like, meteor, this looks completely half-assed.
anyhow, id have to agree with everyone else about the offbeat thing.
and the "dryness."
kinda boring song.
melo was nice.
maybe do a remake?

a solid 4.

I give you ten cause you're cool : D

To be brutally honest though, this song has got more potential to be more focused towards your beginning part. The drums there could be messed with throughout the song while keeping the same mainframe of the beat. I was digging the beginning until you kicked in with the offbeat bass drum. That was a terrible choice (at least in the beginning). You've got a lot of nice instrument FX, I need to learn from you : P

-But try this instead. Keep the same beginning. Take out the gated synth that comes in first before the offbeat bass drum. Now, what you do is put your basic kick drum on every downbeat setup to mix with the glitch beginning. Add more glitches as fills to signify change in the structure in the song and put that offbeat off 'till later or leave it out all together. Then add all the other stuff you've been using throughout your song. Do you have FL? If so, PM me so I can give you my e-mail so you can send me the file, and I'll show you kinda what I'm talking about. NOTICE!!!-You don't have to do this, and even if you do, you don't necessarily have to take my advice. But it might help with future projects.

-Your transfers could be better. Each individual instrument had some great riffing though :D

-Good attempt though, your ideas are great, but can be constructed further to give you even better results!

-ImperfectDisciple-