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Sep 17, 2016 | 8:27 PM EDT
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4.4 MB
1 min 56 sec
0 / 5.00

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My best song so far, in my opinion! I've improved a ton in the hiatus after my last track. I've fixed up quite a few mastering issues my previous songs had (thanks to some tips from an an audio engineer I was with while producing this) and built up some brilliant synth-makin' skillz. I've still got a long way to go, but enjoy the track! ^~^

Made with FL Studio 12.3. - Liquid Void



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Here are just some thoughts I have. I hope I don't come off as a jerk :>

I can hear you piling on the octaves in the beginning. A nice way to provide fill when the melody goes unchanged (maybe look at stereo separation for a different feel).

I feel the mix becomes kinda cluttered around the 0:30 mark when you add a fifth(?). I feel there needs to be some balance between how loud the leading fifth is against the background for it to go smoother. Maybe pull up the background a little and lessen the reverb on the lead?

Also when the cymbals at 0:59, 1:14, 1:28 and 1:43 are heard I feel they come off very bland without anything accompanying the high treble. Maybe a bass-drum hit with the same intensity but not necessarily duration.

Otherwise an interesting track. Keep it up :D

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DJLiquidVoid responds:

Thanks so much! This is some brilliant advice - I'll be sure to work on that in my next track. :^)