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Credits & Info

Date
12/29/2006
File Info
Song
1.2 MB
1 min 15 sec
Score
3.93 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.93 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
420 Plays | 176 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

diz da 1stt thing i came up wit after being introduce to FL studio 6. reviews plz

Reviews


DevnDevn

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 26, 2009

eh?

repetitive but good.



AdixxAdixx

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 1, 2007

nice for your first

nice man! i only got 2 beat too trying to understand fl studio my self you did a better job than me plz chek mine too! good luck on futur^^



Broken-NeedleBroken-Needle

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 1, 2007

good 4 a 1st

Nice, better dan any beat I could come up wit, I only rap,lol. Keep at it n u gna b a legend, 5d it,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out


WillHump4Food responds:

thanks man, but as u can see theres a couple of flaws in it .only practice makes perfect ^_^


B34T1NB34T1N

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 29, 2006

Its good for your 1st

Ok, the drums were what you were trying to achieve since you have posted this as hip hop, maybe could've put alot more in there, Try making a full song, a good finish leaves a good impression since its the last thing that rings in your head once you have already listened to the song. Also, most people don't appreciate bad grammar on here, so just to let you know, also, don't expect many downloads, youre still learning, they will come as you get better, I could also help you a bit if you would like to PM me from you newgrounds inbox, its just a choice though, you don't have to :) keep making those tunes, advertise in the advertising thread and have a happy new year :)


WillHump4Food responds:

thnx man, thanks man.to be honest i didnt put alot of effort into it, took me about a week i kept adding details day by day cause i didnt want to loose patience. but ill pm you no doubt i can use all the help i could get


BuoyBuoy

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 29, 2006

Meh.. it´s ok

It´s not the absolute best thing I´ve heard in the world... thrust me it´s really repetative.

You need more than this.

I know it´s your first... but at least try making a full song! I don´t like loops! There´s not much to review them on >:-(

OK, your main part of this song was the drums. They were all good, but they sound a bit anonymous. The gong at times was cool, but remember that gong's don't play that fast... neither do biggie drums if that's what it was. except for that it was good.

The lead synth was good, but it is seriously over-used and raped now. You need to have some original and not that much used synths.

And you know that's probably all I can say about it. I give this a low 3, but I want you to make full songs- as most of the people who review audio are audio authors themselves. There' not many Flash Authors who see the Audio Portal, though this would fit well in a movie.

Good luck in the future!


WillHump4Food responds:

hey no big deal =] its all good i appreciate the honesty,only that can push me into getting more focused ..ill update