Wow

This is nice for a start.
The drum beat seems a bit sample-ish, and doesn't really fit the rest of the song.

But the main melody is really good, relaxing, and actually a much better melody than most trance melodies are, the feeling it gave was a kinda *life's alright* feeling, very nice for flashes too.

The bass in this had potential, could have made a really good bassline, but you just played one single note, which kinda dissapointed me. If you did a lot more work in the bassline it could have been much better.

This is a god track, could need some work with melody and bassline, but the base concept of the song is really good, good luck with future songs!