Score: 8
"A very interesting piece"
date: January 9, 2007
Wow, you have some very nice work here though, here are a few thoughts for it, take it or leave it of course.
Amazing drum and string work. They sound very nice and are very clear. They really convay a message and pull a sense of a battle together, not sure if that is what you are going for or not.
A preference though, they seem too smashed together. Your note says it was used for something special, so it might be a timing thing for that, but there seems to be a little slight miss in the transitions from one moment to the next. You use a strong entrance on the drums, but maybe a little variety with when you bring the strings in.
Same goes with brining in the voices, maybe try a slower fade or something; not sure if it will work but something to play with.
Overall a nice piece of music, keep at it.
Author's Response:
Yeah, everything had to be sync and shine for the project. However, I will take your words in deep consideration.
