Abstract White

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Abstract White

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Here is the opening track of my new album : Black ! (yay)
Still producing on GarageBand and using absolutely no samples. Deal with it.
Enjoy the listening experience ! <3
Oh and I meant the abrupt ending by the way, don't worry ! =3
(Black Album)

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tsjm13

2016-08-16 14:01:07

I generally associate house to a 4x4 beat not a half time but ok i would consider this some sort of happy up beat trap or hip hop
I think the bells could have some reverb (I some times like giving my instruments reverb)
I like the trumpet sound perhaps it could have a bit of reverb if it hasn't already I like the echo in the intro
The melody changes are nice with the piano and guitar
I think the snare and other drums needs to be stronger and louder
The bass drum could have more bass tbh
The sudden ending could be fixed with an explosion sound or fade out

I think that's all I have to say for now - tsjm13 (Tom)

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MysteriousPresence responds:

Thanks for the review ! :)
In fact, I didn't use any Bells, nor any Trumpet, so I can't really get what you meant ! ^^
I didn't want any Fading or Explosion-like ending because it doesn't suit with the track itself, and it would sound like really weird and generic !
Thanks again ! =)