The Turnip Brothers

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Uploaded
Jul 26, 2016 | 4:55 PM EDT
File Info
Song
6.7 MB
2 min 57 sec
Score
2.45 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 2.45 / 5 stars
Plays
80 Plays
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Genres:
Other - Miscellaneous
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free
beats
journeyjay
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Free under a Creative Commons license:
creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-…/4.0/deed.en_US

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"The Turnip Brothers" Instrumental produced by Jaysin Christensen as part of JourneyJaybeats.

Find JourneyJay ONLINE:
@JourneyJay
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Terms of the license are fully negotiable with the creator, (Jaysin Christensen), at JourneyJayonline@gmail.com.

Produced & directed by Jaysin Christensen "JourneyJay" (2016)

Composed by Jaysin Christensen.

Reviews


TaintedLogicTaintedLogic

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Interesting use of tremelos at the beginning. The first 20 seconds or so had a great sense of suspense and apprehension. The mood changes a little suddenly at :24. I would’ve suggested incorporating more of a buildup instead of a stop-start transition there. Also, your samples aren’t the most realistic, unfortunately, especially the strings, although the instruments still blend pretty well together for a refreshing soundscape. I liked the transition with the piano at 1:04. The rhythm in a lot of parts of the piece is pretty square, though. There are significant chunks of this piece (1:50 - 2:13, for example) that don’t have a lot of mobile content melodically. The ending of the piece is really sudden, and one of my major concerns is that there isn’t much of an overarching sense of direction here. The part at :45 is vaguely reminiscent of a refrain, yet it needs some stronger melodic content. I think part of the problem is that most of the instruments are very staccato and contained. The track never really opens up to release the tension you’ve established throughout. The result is that the piece lacks an “emotional height” that’s used to contrast the somewhat uptight vibe of the rest of the piece. It’s a cool beat, but as a standalone piece I think you needed more of a sense of structural ebb and flow, dynamic contrast, phrasing, and the like. Otherwise, it has a sense of continuity that’s fitting for background music at a trendy restaurant or something, yet it fails to keep my attention as a stand-alone piece. You also don’t really vary the string or brass riffs later in the piece, adding to the lack of a sense of direction. I think the frequencies are well-balanced here, though, and I have no complaints with the mastering. Perhaps the song is a little minimalistic for the mastering to be that important, however. Overall, the composition is what’s really dragging you down IMO. You need stronger melodies, more variety later in the piece, and some fuller texture at some points. I’d say my favorite part of the piece was the drums - they’re very crisp and dynamic. This is a pretty unique track in the way it shifts between moods and instruments, but you need to capitalize more on that by giving it more melodic development and conclusivity. Hope this helped! Keep at it, man. ;)

5.75/10


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JourneyJaybeats responds:

Thank you for your input. My instrumental is intended as a backing track. I did not understand your intent on having instrumentals which are exclusively designed for foreground playback entered in your competition. I only really make backing tracks, so that interpretation would, unfortunately, leave me unfit for this type of event.

I find your advice helpful, and appreciate it. I do not contest your review, or your ratings. :)