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N1NJA - Traverse The Unknown

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Uploaded
Jul 17, 2016 | 11:58 PM EDT
File Info
Song
10.4 MB
4 min 34 sec
Score
3.25 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.25 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
404 Plays | 1 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - House
Tags:
house
chill
progressivehouse
ngauc

Author Comments

Hi! This is my entry to the 2016 NGAUC. I'm competing in the underdog section. If you have any feedback, don't hesitate. Please let me know!

Here's what I used in this song:

Sylenth1
Massive
Logic Pro X
LFOTool
Kontakt 5
Valhalla Room
Ozone 6
Sounds Of KSHMR Vol. 2 (royalty free sample pack offered on splice sounds https://splice.com/sounds/splice/sounds-of-kshmr-vol-2)

Once again, if you have any feedback, please let me know. I'd really appreciate it :)

Reviews


TaintedLogicTaintedLogic

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The intro was pretty cool. It felt very contained and minimalistic at the beginning, so I enjoyed when you started opening it up a little more at :45. The melodies at 1:15 were a little too jumpy (as opposed to stepwise) IMO. The transition at 1:45 was effective, but I think the pads overwhelm the melodies a bit at 1:47. I would try to create more space for the melodies in the mix with some more careful filtering. That said, one thing you’ve done really well in this piece is created a lot of space (as opposed to overwhelming the listener with constant energetic content). You did a good job of bringing out emotion in this piece, like at 2:49, even if the rhythm was a little square there. I liked the build-up into 3:53, although it doesn’t have quite the same cathartic vibe that 1:47 has. In general, the ending felt a bit rushed, and you could’ve capitalized more on changes for melodic development there. In general, I think you really missed out on some opportunities to vary the rhythm more. From 2:19 to 3:23, the most mobile notes are straight quarters, which, despite the emotion, makes the piece seem a bit dry and robotic. Also, I would’ve liked to see you vary what I regard as the main melody (1:47) later in the piece in a climactic way. Right now, there’s not much of an overarching sense of direction here. There were also parts of the piece that felt a little minimalistic, but I think they could still keep my attention if you incorporated some more dynamic contrast and phrasing. I didn’t think any of your instruments or stylistic choices were very unique either. Fortunately, the mastering is up to par and I enjoyed the emotion and atmosphere. Overall pretty good work. If you fix a couple of structural and instrumentation choices, this would be a really solid piece. Keep at it, man. ;)

6.5/10


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N1NJA-Official responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback and for organizing this whole contest! This contest really helped me improve a lot as a producer. Hopefully I'll do better next year :)