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Jun 24, 2016 | 7:00 PM EDT
File Info
1.7 MB
1 min 31 sec
2.53 / 5.00

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Rated 2.53 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
314 Plays | 5 Downloads
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Author Comments

Another track. This time I tried to give it more feelin. I noted that my last works were a litlle confusing...I really put more soul and skill in this. I thought this will mark a new beginning in my tracks! Enjoy!
Made in fl studio.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Your flow is all over the place in this piece. You need to cut the spacing between notes and the beat dramatically. At 0:40 - really need to do some work there and get everything sounding more realistic and less generic, I would also suggest you adjust the tempo a little bit so you can see what I am talking about.

Your loop is spot on, but the spacing leaves this piece to be desired. The melody reminds me a LOT of Willow on the NES (which is a good thing and earns you 3 stars). Touch this puppy up some and utilize some change-ups and lengthen this piece a little more and you will see some high ratings come your way.

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MarkFiend responds:

Thx dude, i will care about those spaces in a glad that someone can give me a true review about my work...i was feelin empty because I wasnt sure about what i was doing...yes, I note imperfections, but I rlly need someone to be specific with my weak points. Thank you, very aprecciated. Experiment with chiptunes in fl studio could be a mess. Ps. Srry english its not my native language