Score: 6
"(I don't like typing in this box)"
date: December 16, 2006
Alrighty then, I'm back. Hmmmm...
Originality: 5, I've heard this before...
Diversity: 7, The song varies, and switches between things many times, but it still feels like the same thing to much.
Clarity: 4, See con #4
Effort: 10, Many of the artists here deserve a ten for this, and you're one of them.
Overall: 6, While this isn't a very incuraging rating, you need to keep up your work. Everyone's music wan't so great once (except Mozart, but he doesn't count :P), so keep trying.
Pros
~I like the way the drums pull out and that soft background kicks in for a while.
~The noise that starts at 1:18 is really nice, it always adds to a song to have more than one thing playing at once like that.
~Am I crazy, or does that part at 1:57 switch between speakers. (IE: left-right variation) It sounds like it does, and makes a nice effect. Also at that part, the soft background noise is again really nice.
~Oooh, the pause at 2:20 is really nice. You almost hit that "perfect" sense of beauty I keep looking for.
Cons
~That really low noise right at the beggining, (I think it's called a base, but I'm not very music-literate) really bugs me, it seems to override almost every other noise in the song.
~I'm not sure how easy/hard this is, but could you make the main instrument a bit more... echoey? It may already be like that, but the thing I mentioned above might make it impossible to hear.
~The drums at the beggining feel really random. I think it would be better off without it.
~The noises need to be a bit "softer", I have no idea how to explain this, or how you can do it, but try anyways. :P
Here to help,
<(C~M)><(^ ^)>
Author's Response:
ok wow! longest review evar!
but extremely helpful i must say.
i was going to leave the song a final as is, but i think if i submit another vdrsion with all of these fixes, and maybe a little more =D
(btw if anyone reads this, all my exclusives are at six1studios, bassforce has a 5:00 remix)
ok sorry lol needed to do taht.
OK will take all of this into consideration, and make a remix final like alone.
htough the only thing i would disagree with, is the hardness of the song. its sort of meant to be a relaly rave mix, i wanted lotsa bass and stuff i guess the melody needs to be louder.
he drums at the begining are to direct from the song hehe, thinking it will be noobish, then all of a sudden BAM. crazy bass tat just kicks and your stuck there like HOLY CRAP!!!!
lol so yea, thx for the long ass review.
pce