CRAP MAN!

I like, wrote a whole review for this, and lost all the stuff ; (

Here's an overview though : D

-Nice drum samples
-Composition lacking
-Weird synths, but reflects the mood of the song.
-Song detached
-Beginning and end lack value

-Composition is your key downfall, so work on it! You've got the sounds. Produce the music, the feeling. This song has got little of anything without style and art in it. Keep learning to compose your thoughts and string 'em together : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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