Neat
Hmm, there are definately improvements from the first.
BlackPlastic already said that it was somewhat repetative, as an ambient track it serves it's purpose well, and if I recall remember this song originated from just 4 notes right?
The lead does well for the piece, this song in my opinion is far sadder in nature then "WhenAngelsCry" due to it's somewhat repetitive nature and the melody itself is much sadder.
have you ever considered putting in some rain sfx? It may have made the song more emotional.
In any case, great work IamMark, i'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime. Keep up the good fight and keep them coming! Take it easy.