Score: 9
"Very nice!"
date: December 7, 2006
I saw a rainy day underwater, where the drops of liquid pummel into the thin layer of the lake, but the drops are sucked into the lake to be taken away later.
Very nice song, the melody synth was weird at times with how it came in, maybe tune in some dynamics, like a drop in volume at the end of the phrase to add a sense of finishing a sentence from the story, then continuing onward.
-Great!
-ImperfectDisciple-
Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall" (only 3 or so more d-loads 'till a gold track : D)
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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