Okay, I'll tell you what to do, how to make this song better.
Make more songs.

Now srsly, you got it. You know how to make a decent tune. Or have it in your veins at least. The only thing you need is experience.

So, needless to say.
4.5/5 Stars
Keep it going bro, you go it!

Oooh, this is actually quite good :D.
Really love that bass, sounds epic for something made in sytrus :D.
Still there are a couple of things I need to point out.

First of all the piano. IT actually sounds like quite a decent sample, but I feel like it needs a little high end boost to make it sound a bit clearer. Also, I would personally a bit more reverb on it. You have some reverb going on already, but it's mainly on the low end while I think it would have sound better to focus the reverb more on the hi end parts.
Secondly, the eq needs to be a bit better in general. The piano frequencies are colliding a lot with the mid range on the reeze bass. I would suggest lower some of the mid range frequencies(The parts where the piano shines the most) in the bass in order to let the piano shine. the main eq problem though is the percussion. Try to turn down the hats and crash a tiny bit in the hi end ranges. As it is now, none of the other instruments are able to shine in the hi-end at all, and thus I feel like something like the bass aren't able to fulfill it's potential.

Overall a pretty good track. Love the melodies, and the problems mainly lies with the eq.
4/5
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This song has a fantastic buildup. It slowly starts getting more intense, which is terrific. You did an excellent job on that.

You also used some great sounds that all go well together. Just wish you would've added a couple more sounds to the song. It does get kind of bland at a point.

I like the atmosphere of the song :)

Track has cool vibe and melody, basses are ok.
There's nothing i can really complain about.
Great job! :)