Why? Just why?

The song seems like it would be kinda good, but I can't really talk about it when I can't hear it properly.
Don't record it with a microphone while it's being played from a laptop, it's not good.

The song it's pretty impressive but i don't know if you did id because you record it with a phone

the song doesn't even sound bad, but why record it with your phone ?

great song! but i'm with CobaltZ, you say you might not be using an external microphone, but you gotta figure how to stop it from sounding like that

Sounds like a great song but I really cant enjoy it if its recorded by an external mic... No, Just no.