Well...it's not bad.
But I guess the people on your MySpace friends list don't know techno. I'd imagine something more fast paced, not as FL-esque, more background to it to be a popular track. Honestly, speed it up and Point 75 wouldn't be that bad either.
It's hard to match ZeRo-BaSs and PX9 and DreamScaper, but I respect your efforts anyway.
Good luck!
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