Nice beat
Much better than the last. This one shows a lot more potential than the other one I looked at. Again, I blame the emptiness on the lack of effects, especially reverb. I really like the whining sound in this one, its overdone but simply sounds better than that "oh" in tension. Your basslines are really simple, and I'm not sure if they're too simple or what, but I think it could at least use some variation. It's a much catchier song, but still doesn't seem to have all the effort it needs to be a nice juicy 10. Eh.. I'm out of comments and after listening for 15 minutes straight, anything song be getting annoying. -Chutzpah (4/5)