I really enjoy the song, feels slighlty unclear at times though. Might just be my taste :P
Btw, I noticed in your last song, you didn't know why people couldn't use t in gd, and thats because at Licensing Terms, have have it set on: "You may not use this work without making specific arrangements with the artist." Try putting it in the one where it can freely be used in online games and content (free). Following you hoping for more songs like this XD