Score: 5
"You will get it soon"
date: November 16, 2006
You have the makings of a good 80's pop tune. It is obvious that you are learning, as I listen to your works, it progressively gets better. I have a feeling that when it is all said and done, you will be one of the good ones, so keep at it. Now to the review. The song needs some structure. Remember, a song is like a story, it needs a begining to set up the main body, which is the middle. The end should be the capper and finish what you started...That is unless you plan to make what is referred to as a continual (see concept albums). That is to say a story that is told in several different songs, but deal with the same subject matter. Also remember to have a definate rythm to the song so people can tap their fingers and toes. Keep at it :-)