Hey!

I like this one!

The guy above is right, don't be too much critical with your own work, it' not worth it, and I say don't aim perfection (at least I'm trying this way), it just makes people stressful.

Anyways I think this is cool and if you want 1 little suggestion on the technical/compositional side, I honestly think this piece is great as it is already, but for example in a longer map in a game this would be a little bit short and repetitive, but that robot factory thing is kind of true :D

Keep it up!
Put up some more of this and I'm sure you'll get into the Audio portal!

( PS. I don't know Goth music too much, I thought it's some kind of rock sub-genre, maybe you messed up the genre selection by accident? I think this would have more views/reviews in the Electronic-Industrial or Video Game or maybe Ambient category, just sayin )

intresting. Very simple but atractive.
BTW, stop saying "meh, ugly" because is not meh or ugly, its good.
Bye.

i can see this song playing in like a game , like uh, in a robot factory. dont be so critical on your work, or you'll never make progress! i mean you should take it into consideration of what you think, just do what you enjoy!

WOW, for being your first loop, i´t very awesome :D