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Ay homie dis aint a bad song just needs song minor adjustments like bass and beatz it 2 loud and distorted datz y i gave u 7 on clarity but i notice dat ur still learnin and i respect dat as good as i am im still learnin it 2 and dere was 2 many vocals playin at same time u if woulda did it once in a awhile song woulda turned out betta but it was good 4 ur 5 submission i can see some good thangs in ur future along wit some otha NG artists when u get lil betta wit fl id like 2 do a collab wit u check out some of my music and let me kno if u want 2

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